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[Day in The Life of a Gray]

Nice but..

it was pretty nice, except the whole thing pretty much had the feel of a trailer, rather then a story. i think its because of the music and the fade-in/fade-out text blocks. also i think you could put a little more effort into your drawings.

Sgt-DoberMan responds:

Thanks, I'm aware that some of the graphics are balls, but then I seriously suck with a mouse, working on it though.

[Len - ep. 1 - part 2/2]

Good show

very nice allthough indeed the sound is a bit poor. are you sure you made this in flash, because it kinda looks like a cartoon/movie file exported into flash. other then that keep it up

RonaldRaven responds:

yeah, it was originally made in Flash, but since we weren't originally going to put it on the web, we edited and added music in a video editor so we could put it optimize it for DVD viewing. for NG, I reimported the video and compressed it in flash. I'll try not to do that next time, and we will be working out the audio problems for the future. glad you liked it, though.

[Transitions (Star Wars)]

Nice

a good looking trailer, ill be looking forward to seeing more. however, each starwars thing should always start with Starwars logo->story->space->planet->spaceship. :p but ill forgive you since this is only a trailer. i especially liked the "go empire!" thing. keep it up, you might make it in my favorites, and we know you really really really want that ;)

Brand-new-hero responds:

dont worry buddy it does - not the scrolling text tho, it'll have the episode name after the star wars sign, but remmeber in the trailer when u see the sign go bakwards from the screen? thats the beginning its just i didnt wanna give away what it was at the beginning of the trailer. an hell yea i wanan b in your favourites! v flattering ppl consider me a fav so yea!

[Projective Detective ep2]

very nice

very funny! i like random jokes, allthough i feel there are a bit toomany in this one. it seemed to slow the story line down a bit too much. other then that great work!

ayegowj responds:

I heard that a lot, about the slow down, we'll try to pace the stroy next
time.

[The truth about war...]

failed

i totally understand the message you are trying to say, but the flash just isnt interesting enough to keep watching. there are more creative ways to bring this message to the world. that is, if you have to, because the message is already well known

tat2brat20 responds:

Thanks for the constructive critisism. I love hearing from everyone and getting an idea on diffrent people's opinions.

[_=-The Dream-=_]

Wow

this is the kinda stuff that makes children pickup guns and go kill teachers. not funny to watch at all. plus i dislike the music :)

sammy-D responds:

Be a real man and use a sword :)